the academy and the past" part 1 and 2

"the academy and the past" part 1 and 2
this episodes starts withg the archangel going to empok nor and several days later a crowd of people surrounds to girls fighting and the instructor goes in to break it and fighting ay i guess it's the agony booth for both of you LETS GO!!

in ops they picked up something mysterious and they suspect it's the alliance so thay check it out and they discover a temperol signature and they find the young jad'n since colonel jad'n got killed during the attack with the alliance. cadets find his ship damaged and discover it's from the past and they rescue jad'n the 3 others of the crew were dead and they find that the core is going crictical and they got the hell out of there name they beamed back to the runabouts and then the ship explodes in collaping the rift to send jad'n back to his time. the lord marshall orders a communique to the archangel to have them come back to deal with SGT jad'n because he stabbed one of the doctors

and introucing the ISS COMBATANT

this jad'n is darker then colonel jad'n in the pilot of dark frontier

one of the cadets trys to calm him down to tell him that their trying to help the archangel comes in to dock with empok nor it use several thrust manuvers to line up and capt mathis and doctor davidiuos walk through the airlock mean while the security personal has their weapons on sgt jad'n and jad'n has a hostage with a phaser to the cadets head

and capt mathis talks to jad'n to get him to stop and at the end he gives mathis the phaser and go to the archangel to go to terok nor to try help SGT JAD'N and figure how to send him back

after the two cadets reconcile and kissed the at the end the cgi imagine of the archangel detachs from the station and goes IN FRAME and goes to the warp the screen gets a bright blue flash and then goes to black ending the episode

what do you think of the plot casey?

casey what's your idea for the pilot?

Hmmm parts of this sounds really good.

Not sure if we could get a Jad'n though :/

The story would need to pick up where Episode 3 of Dark Frontier leaves off. Which hasn't been written yet. So there would be some changes as the final writing comes together. But its a cool start.

i was thinking at the end of the episode of darkfrontier the archangel get like to assignments first bring the new cadets to empok nor and then the crew of the archangel goes on there second assignment in episode 4

would that work?

that could work we could say he's one of the supporters for the romulan rogue group the naradas